Wednesday, 8 October 2014


OGR Green Light Review

Green Light Review

1 comment:

  1. OGR 13/10/2014

    Hi Marion,

    Firstly - I'm really sorry you had to wait this long for your feedback; in short, you weren't in my folder of named blogs - don't know why - so I literally missed you out! Nothing personal I promise :)

    Okay - I'm going to play hardball with you and simply say that the creative jump from Octavia - suspended city - to Octavia a 'city on a spider's back' is just too much and too far and has nothing to do with Calvino's vision (which, let's face it) is incredible/surreal enough. This is an example of style creep really - you get a job to do, and you make it about something completely different, probably because you have a soft-spot for 'spiders with cities on their backs'.

    I want you to return to the extract and actually deal with imagining the city as described by Calvino - which, in design terms, is very complex and requires a lot of thought! To assist you further, I want you to take a look at the Octavia feedback left on your classmates' blogs: